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Only In Heaven
Contributed by
wizard
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Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 10:05:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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To find an angel on this earth
Is a search that's truly worth
The time it takes although in vain
For on this earth is only pain
So many in my arms I've thought
To be the angel which I've besought
But slowly does their halo dim
And wings disappear on a whim
Heaven's where the angels hide
With open arms and wings spread wide
So Heaven take me high above
And finally...let me find love
Copyright ©
wizard
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2006-01-10 10:05:20]
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Re: Only In Heaven
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by bernard2 on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 10:13:54 AM AEST
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| Nice prayer I will say amen. bernard2 |
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Re: Only In Heaven
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by brew on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 10:38:40 AM AEST
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So beautiful.
Oh, and btw ......glad to see you posting again. Missed you and those lovely writes. Hugs for a friend. Dont be a stranger.
Brew~ |
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Re: Only In Heaven
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 03:41:01 PM AEST
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Paul you have surely been missed dear friend. This is a sad, yet so beautiful write perfectly penned and delivered.
Heaven's where the angels hide
With open arms and wings spread wide
So Heaven take me high above
And finally...let me find love
A heavenly divine masterpiece.
Great to see u posting again.
*warm hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: Only In Heaven
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 03:59:51 PM AEST
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Oh Paul...truly a beautiful piece of work. Sad tho...
Glad to see you posting again, my friend.. and thanks for the PM....
Jenni |
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Re: Only In Heaven
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by fielding88 on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 05:34:47 PM AEST
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| Excellent flow, storytelling, and ending. Just...well done, it's that simple. |
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Re: Only In Heaven
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by Justintears on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 06:45:20 PM AEST
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I've left myself pondering these thoughts many times in my my hollowing heart. "Absolutely gorgeous" with every line!, helping me to regain losts hopes i once cherished. It makes be begin to believe again...... Thank you.....
~justin~ |
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Re: Only In Heaven
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 06:58:04 PM AEST
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Omigosh, wiz ... this is wonderful. Such a lovely piece, truly.
So nice to see a write like this from a member of the
opposing sex. Gives me renewed faith that there are men
out there, too, that are searching for the truth and beauty that
lies within the heart and soul of someone deserving.
Captivating, wiz .
and she is there waiting. Of this I have no
doubt because your heart is open ...
~Breezy |
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Re: Only In Heaven
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by Lilly-Quill on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 08:22:33 PM AEST
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Yes, let angels come for such a heart’s desire
Too many careless with no taste for truth’s fire
Father allow Your time redeemed for this special one
Let her not be far in the distant months to come
Forever allow this gem, and others like him, to soar
So that when it comes to gratitude, they humbly implore
To heights of True-love, with the angels above
Oh Father, God, fill our hearts with grace for such LOVE
Regards, ~Lilly-Quill*~ |
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Re: Only In Heaven
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 10:18:20 PM AEST
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Paul, I know I've already commented on this before, but it's so beautiful I find myself commenting on this phenomenal masterpiece once again. You dearest Paul are a beautiful earthly angel who has a big beautiful heart of gold. You are a most deserving soul and I wish you my dear earthly angel friend a true love like that of those made in heaven~ The wamest & best of wishes to you always my dear earthly angel.
love n hugs from ur devoted fan,
sue m |
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