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Empty
Contributed by
OzChick
on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 08:38:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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~***~
I feel empty, bereft.
Inside there's nothing left.
No pleasure or gladness,
Nor tears, only sadness.
I feel hollow, resonant.
Pain a permanent resident.
No visitors admitted.
No joyous thought considered.
I feel lonely and blue.
No life without you.
No clouds silver lining.
Only my heart pining.
I feel lost and afraid.
I wish you had stayed.
But you had to move on.
And I don't belong.
I feel so empty.
~***~
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OzChick
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2006-01-10 08:38:56]
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Re: Empty
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 05:01:56 PM AEST
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Awww OzChick.I am so sorry.... I know the feeling. I hope you are feeling better now. I know the emptiness would never really go away, but trust me, it will get better.
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Jenni |
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Re: Empty
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th January 2006 @ 03:31:10 PM AEST
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Sorry 4 your pain, if i may . . .
(((((((ozchick))))))))
keep up with the writting i'll certainly keep on reading . . .
Ben |
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Re: Empty
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 13th February 2006 @ 01:37:59 AM AEST
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| This is so me after my mom died Jenny, darn this one hits so close to home. "I feel so empty".....I know just what ya mean. Peace and love to you, Laura |
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Re: Empty
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by laststarontheleft on
Thursday, 14th January 2010 @ 11:53:48 AM AEST
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This is so very sad......
and beautifully written x
Star x x x |
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