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My Relaxation (Erased)
Contributed by
princess_of_pain
on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 09:34:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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Like a breath of fresh air,
On a cool spring day;
Like crossing the finish line,
After a long hard race;
Like seeing your family,
For the first time in years;
It can help you relax,
Take a way all your fears.
As if you jump into a river,
Washing all the pain away;
Feeling the drops of beauty,
Makes you smile through the day;
People think that your crazy;
As the grin spreads across your face.
You are finally stress free,
All the pain and sadness,
ERASED.
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princess_of_pain
... [
2006-01-09 21:34:19]
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Re: My Relaxation (Erased)
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by fearlessleader7 on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 10:20:24 PM AEST
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Nice work...I like how the emotion in the poem just accumulated, and reached a climax with the last line.
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Re: My Relaxation (Erased)
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by JenJen on
Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 06:10:47 PM AEST
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once again amazing write!! i loved it if i havnt said this before yuor work is amazing!!! keep it up
good luck
Luv
~*~Jen~*~
~*~xXx~*~ |
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