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right away
Contributed by
Honesty_strikes_my_pen
on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 08:58:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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is it completely crazy
for me to fall in love with you?
is it totally wrong
not to know what to do?
will you consider my feelings
before you break my heart?
will you let me finish
before you start?
is it alright if we talk
sometimes as friends
i can't feel without your love
but i can't live without you as a friend
I don't want things to be aquard
between you and I
but having u in my life,
its accential
without you i won't get by
chasing you around
has given me a migrian
yeah, you've messed with my head
but caused my heart more of pain
I hope we can hold on
to each other for life
to keep you around
I would make the biggest strife
You mean the world to me
but u only want to be friends
I know you feel strongly
but I wish the feeling would end
I have been trying to keep my feelings
contained within myself
I want to make them go away
but they're already on the shelf
Put out there
for everyone to see
I thought maybe that
would help you to be
Comfortable with the fact
that I cannot give up on you
and that loving u
is something i can't help but do
So before you break my heart
Don't go straight for the knife
just remember losing u as a friend-
could possibly take my life
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2006-01-09 20:58:46]
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Re: right away
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by Drapes on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 03:25:19 PM AEST
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That's really great. I really understand it...I've been there.
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Re: right away
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 04:42:43 PM AEST
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A sad emotional and heart breaking write.I can so much relate to the pain you speak of. Well expressed and conveyed. Keep penning down ur emotions for it helps the heart to vent. Well done and keep up with the great work.
*warm hugs*
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