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2 much vodka
Contributed by
Kazzy1231
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Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 05:22:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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There is 2 much vodka in me.
I can not see what it is doing 2 me and my body.
I'm starting 2 lose my mind.
The old me is getting left behind.
Throwing things out the window.
Maybe I should just stick with bingo.
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Re: 2 much vodka
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by Sophie_Taylor on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 08:07:08 PM AEST
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great poem,
it shows the true feelings, i was like that..i had to give up smoking..and now that i have, i will never touch one again!
Sophie xoxo |
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Re: 2 much vodka
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by Doriens_Picture on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 01:27:15 AM AEST
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i think your poems would come out better if they did not have rhymes
they dont have to rhyme to be poems
and you can never Drink too much Vodka as long as its chiled
wait thats the rushin in me |
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