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I am not blind..
Contributed by
ElizabethLaura
on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 05:21:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Dont expect too much of me
I am only a young girl who cannot see
All I need is a hand to hold
During the nights which are long and cold
I dont need your pity or sympathy
I just need a friend to stay by me
My entire life has been dark and dreary
I wish for just one day I could see clearly
I often trip and stumble as I walk
I rarely speak for I am afraid to talk
I live each day as if in a dream
I try to wake up as I yell and scream
People pass me without a second glance
For the girl with the black eyes, deserves no chance
My heart and my life are an empty hole
For I am not blind, just a troubled soul.
Copyright ©
ElizabethLaura
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2006-01-09 17:21:24]
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Re: I am not blind..
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by Kazzy1231 on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 05:35:38 PM AEST
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| Great write,feel free 2 comment on some of my poems! |
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Re: I am not blind..
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by Dizza_13 on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 09:45:20 PM AEST
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i think its good, very good. good rhythm, good
emotion just all round good.
diz |
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Re: I am not blind..
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 09:34:43 AM AEST
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This is really good. I thought it was emotional and It was well written and it flowed smoothly..
take care
christina
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Re: I am not blind..
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by snowflake on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 05:28:58 PM AEST
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Great Write i can relate to the situation your in i like the flow of it it keep moving along so nicely Great work
*~SnOwFlAkE~* |
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