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My Life
Contributed by
ElizabethLaura
on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 02:58:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Its a feeling of emptiness
of belonging nowhere
Its wondering if anyone cares
or if anyone wants to care
Its feeling like no one understands
and no one wants to understand
Its the smile on your face each day that everyone believes in
when you cry every night
Its the pills in your hand
but not enough courage to take them
Its the way you look away when a glance falls on you
because of the shame you feel
Its wanting one person in the world to love you
but knowing there is no one
Its scary
Its my life
Copyright ©
ElizabethLaura
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2006-01-09 14:58:55]
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Re: My Life
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by dalamar on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 03:03:06 PM AEST
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Great write. Keep up the good work
~Dalamar
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Re: My Life
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by marie on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 03:51:59 PM AEST
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| beautiful write. :-) |
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Re: My Life
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 04:18:04 PM AEST
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A sad thought provoking write. I can feel ur pain and sadness through ur words. The empty feeling that one has. The need to be loved, though it feels like nobody does or that nobody cares. I can so much relate to ur write.
Chin up and may u see brighter days ahead. A sad but very well penned piece of poetry. Thanks so much for sharing ur work with us.
*heartfelt hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: My Life
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 07:52:01 PM AEST
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Heartfelt write...one with which I can identify.
Lots of emotions in this...
Hope things get better for you soon..
Jenni |
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Re: My Life
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by Drapes on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 08:41:42 PM AEST
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I hear you... Sad, but great write.
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