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Feelings
Contributed by
Fernanda_F_Rocha
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Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 09:03:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I feel that soft hand
Brushing against my face
In a tender caress
So vibrating
I feel a body
That in mine is recreated
As the sunshine
In a brook of fresh water
I feel the calm that smoothes me
In a heat wave
That it invades the depths of my soul
In a joyful peace
I feel something that fills my chest
That presses against my throat
That accelerates my heart
That runs in my veins
The blood gushing
It is as if reaching paradise
And not wanting to release ever.
By Fernanda F. Rocha©
Copyright ©
Fernanda_F_Rocha
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2006-01-09 09:03:07]
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Re: Feelings
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 10:51:00 AM AEST
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A most lovely and tender write indeed . . .
Ben |
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Re: Feelings
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by bernard2 on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 10:58:37 AM AEST
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| Sweet and tender. A love letter indeed. bernard2 |
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Re: Feelings
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 11:19:38 AM AEST
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| a well written poem. |
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Re: Feelings
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 04:12:57 PM AEST
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A beautiful and well penned piece of poetry. I like the imagery u cast into ur readers head. Thanks for sahring this beautiful poem with us.
*hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: Feelings
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 03:58:07 AM AEST
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| very lovely write on this poem! I loved it..-; |
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