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DIS ****(CRAP) DRAGGIN
Contributed by
emystar
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Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 05:44:25 AM in AEST
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Just to see you smile
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NOW YOU'RE SMILING!!!!!!!!!!!!
SultryRose's Signatures
Climbing outta bed
Yea, still got my head.
Wouldn't have known
But it's sewed on.
Watch out it's a **** attack
Move over get way back.
Dis **** draggin me down
Such meanderings brings frowns
Dis **** always tryin, lyin, tryin,
repeat.
Dirty dishes in my sink
Gotta find somethin to drink.
Jus startin my day, ah yea
Little minetes hear ova there.
burdens gotta go away
In Jesus name, I humbly say.
Demons get in my face
Not of this human race.
see they have no power
Unless we embrace the liers
Jus push doubt plum away
Listen to nuthin they say.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2006-01-09 05:44:25]
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Re: DIS ****(CRAP) DRAGGIN
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 10:55:07 AM AEST
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Ferocious emy down right raw and beautiful
tells it like it is very effective write u go girl . . .
((((emy))))
Ben
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Re: DIS ****(CRAP) DRAGGIN
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by bernard2 on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 11:01:07 AM AEST
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| Love your Picuters Emy and yes I am smilinghave a good day now from bern. |
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Re: DIS ****(CRAP) DRAGGIN
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 11:26:35 AM AEST
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| Hello emystar! This is a wonderful write, as always. |
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Re: DIS ****(CRAP) DRAGGIN
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 04:00:06 PM AEST
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Hey there sweet lady Emy. Yo girl ya got me smiling. Always a pleasure to read ur great work. Missed ya girl. Keep 'em coming my dear friend.
love n hugs,
~sue the roo from across the blue~ |
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Re: DIS ****(CRAP) DRAGGIN
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by Willofree on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 07:59:08 PM AEST
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Rather humorous and playful write and fun to read. The last stanza shows some wisdom.
Well done
Will |
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Re: DIS ****(CRAP) DRAGGIN
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by robertdavidson on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 04:16:05 AM AEST
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emystar,
A very amusing and enjoyable poem to read. I especially liked your competent use of a dialect. Very well written.
Robert Davidson.
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Re: DIS ****(CRAP) DRAGGIN
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by Aquaelius on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 12:50:42 AM AEST
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Well, when dishes pile up in my sink... that's where my demons come from. I pray for them to get washed... never happens.
Oh yeah, I'm in love... this is good, real good... loved it. Don't need the picture to bring a smile to my face, got your words for that.
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Re: DIS ****(CRAP) DRAGGIN
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 03:25:32 AM AEST
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lol i needed that.
you made me smile.
great job.
hugs |
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Re: DIS ****(CRAP) DRAGGIN
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 03:36:53 AM AEST
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"burdens gotta go away
In Jesus name, I humbly say. "
I like this line, miss.... amen to ya, He is always able to protects us when we call on Him, and His burden is light. Keep making sure to stand in Truth.
Peace be with you.
Joshua |
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Re: DIS ****(CRAP) DRAGGIN
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 02:10:48 AM AEST
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| I hear ya, got my eyes and ears closed in certain areas. Thank you for the yellow faces, got my smile on, my chuckle is in action. All abooaard, the luv train is about to leave for heaven, no tickets needed, see you all there. Raquel Leah |
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Re: DIS ****(CRAP) DRAGGIN
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by Sinned on
Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 09:51:08 AM AEST
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Dis dot mi laffing .
I love most of yer rites
Sinned |
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