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In A Brothers View
Contributed by
shady472001
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Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 03:53:06 AM in AEST
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I dropped a rose as they lowered your casket into the ground,
Shots rang out as I turned around.
I froze and I could hardly breathe,
I asked my parents if we could leave.
You were alone in an empty burial plot,
You died so young who would have thought.
I was so angry as they drove by,
Firing off rounds with no reason why.
You were ready to get married and start a family of your own,
I was only 13 and hardly grown.
They took my brother the one I respect,
They pierced my heart something I can never forget.
This is what it was like in a brother’s view,
Alone for one moment as I said goodbye to you.
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shady472001
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2006-01-09 03:53:06]
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Re: In A Brothers View
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by emystar on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 03:59:14 AM AEST
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Very sad but written well. So sorry 4 your loss.
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Re: In A Brothers View
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by guiltycircles on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 04:52:13 AM AEST
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| heart-breaking...well written |
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