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Untitled (Help with a title?)
Contributed by
Killingmehslowly
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Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 12:23:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I need you so much,
And sometimes it's scary to admit.
All it takes is just one touch,
One touch and we both benefit.
This is above lust,
Above childhood romance,
This is full out love or bust.
Our relationship is no chance,
We were meant to be.
Two as one, lovers forever.
Ignorant are the ones who can't see,
I will leave you never.
You have me captivated, spell-bound.
Everything I need, I find in you.
You are what makes my world go round.
Our love is eternal, our love is true.
So, I guess what this poem is supposed to do,
Is remind you just how much I love you.
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Killingmehslowly
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2006-01-09 00:23:48]
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Re: Untitled (Help with a title?)
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by emystar on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 04:42:59 AM AEST
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Is remind you just how much I love you.
I'd call it REMIND YOU.
good write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Untitled (Help with a title?)
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 11:47:14 AM AEST
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| A good write, call it Remind. |
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Re: Untitled (Help with a title?)
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by TREBOR on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 03:09:30 PM AEST
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Good poem
How about ALL OR NOTHING |
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Re: Untitled (Help with a title?)
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by SocAstn on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 04:36:48 PM AEST
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I like this one... it's short and easy to read. like a jog.... therefore, i would name it, "Jogging Your Memory." Good write.
Austin |
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Re: Untitled (Help with a title?)
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by fearlessleader7 on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 05:53:10 PM AEST
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Very sweet...some strong emotions there.
"Reminding You" sounds like a nice title.
Great job! |
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