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Immortality
Contributed by
tonic
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Thursday, 25th July 2002 @ 10:07:43 PM in AEST
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Immortality
Nothing seems to ease the pain
Of loving but only in vain
My heart once alive but now slain
Living life seems just to plain
Death would be to easy you see
So I'm cursed with Immortality
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Re: Immortality
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by Terry_Stephen_Driscoll on
Thursday, 25th July 2002 @ 11:22:19 PM AEST
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Immortality a 'curse' an interesting thought.
Good write tonic
Terry |
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Re: Immortality
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by Clarity on
Friday, 26th July 2002 @ 02:38:47 AM AEST
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really liked this...i'm gonna read ur other poems...keep it up!!!
jenny |
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Re: Immortality
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by markymark on
Friday, 26th July 2002 @ 04:02:37 AM AEST
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| Nice write, i think i have to die to be immortal myself...well done with this one...Mark... |
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Re: Immortality
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by chatabox on
Friday, 26th July 2002 @ 05:51:58 AM AEST
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the pain of lost loves unbearable and you feel you dont want to go on..........believe me it will ease and your heart will soon be pounding again for a new love.
A short but remarkable poem. |
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Re: Immortality
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by xFalling_of_Starsx on
Friday, 26th July 2002 @ 06:05:48 AM AEST
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| really like it. Death always is the easier route. |
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Re: Immortality
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by orgygirl on
Friday, 26th July 2002 @ 06:09:15 AM AEST
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| Very true. i really enjoyed this. |
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