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Crimson Piano Score
Contributed by
SmileSkinDeep
on
Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 05:44:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Crimson keys
Black and white,
A flickering ray of light
It slowly pieces together
Just like my life:
Beautiful...
But somehow not right
Music is spilling;
Escaping my veins
Tearing through the atmosphere
Expressing my pain
Beautiful harmonies
On their own
Beautiful crimson keys
But nothing more to show
Bleed so deep
I am alone,
The blood I weep:
Remains unknown
Secluded from the world
Retired to my music
So Beautiful
So tragic
So addicting
It's almost toxic
Unimaginable,
But I'm living it
Unbelieveable:
The punishment
Unfit
Blood
Staining the tiles
The bitter memories
The skin-deep smiles
The reality of it all
The truth
The pain when I fall
To lay down on the floor
To slowly die
See the blood from beneath the door
To discover my masterpiece,
And my last paino score
Crimson keys
Black and white
It's beautiful...
But somehow not right
Copyright ©
SmileSkinDeep
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2006-01-08 17:44:26]
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Re: Crimson Piano Score
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by needledancing on
Tuesday, 20th March 2007 @ 08:30:52 AM AEST
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| A good write...I enjoyed the first verse through to the last. |
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Re: Crimson Piano Score
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by Dom on
Tuesday, 20th March 2007 @ 10:32:56 AM AEST
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I found this through the comments box and the title made me want to read it. I can't believe a piece this evocative and emotional has only had one comment, I loved it!
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