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UGLY.
Contributed by
butterflygirl40
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Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 02:36:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I feel so achy inside because I have so much ache and no one agrees with me.
I get angry because there isn't any medicine to work for my ache .
MY eyes look all baggy, because I don't feel like no beauty.
I feel like I am so beefy because I eat to much candy .
I wished I lived in a big city .
I wished I didn't have such a sorry daddy.
I am always so fussy and grumpy .
I hate the grocery stores and I am always so jumpy and I feel so lazy and lonely.
I don't like the wintry nights they are too cold.
I love to eat taffy candy and drink ice cold tea ..
But even after all of this I still feel ugly and trashy.
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Re: UGLY.
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by dc on
Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 02:47:49 PM AEST
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| Hey , that was kinda neat! |
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Re: UGLY.
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by the_pied_piper on
Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 03:42:53 PM AEST
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| kinda unclear but cool none the less ... def something that i can relate to |
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Re: UGLY.
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by PoetBaby814 on
Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 04:42:19 PM AEST
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| no offense but that was bad its makes no sense ur just rambeling on an on. |
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Re: UGLY.
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 12:38:07 AM AEST
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This is different I liked it
LG |
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Re: UGLY.
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 10:39:18 AM AEST
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u say what u feel and u put it in2 words and it sounds very sincere 2 me and very honest and while there r a lot of ugly things in the world i doubt your one of them nice write . . .
Ben |
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Re: UGLY.
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by priss on
Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 07:46:19 PM AEST
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| i like this poem and your unique writing style. |
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Re: UGLY.
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by PoetBaby814 on
Tuesday, 18th September 2007 @ 08:59:24 AM AEST
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| im sorry if u felt my previous comment was mean i was trying to give feedback i think it was awhile ago but it was mean and it could have been more constructive so i apologize. |
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