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Heaven Can't
Contributed by
dc
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Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 01:22:10 PM in AEST
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Tell me why, Why would they want to do this to me
Tell me how, How I’m gonna to make it through the day
It took most my life, Just to find you, baby
Now they’ve gone and took it all away
Tell me how, How am I gonna pull this one off
When I can’t even pull myself out of bed
The thought of life with out you, just breaks my heart
To think at all, it just hurts my head
Oh God, this ain’t the way it’s suppose to be
Heaven can’t need you, more than me
Tell me when, when will I stop staring at the door
Expecting that you’re just gonna stroll right on in
You’ll just say, awe babe, I’m sorry I’m so late,
And did I miss you, Darlin’ how you been
Tell me what, what’s the use of a man like me
I never had a reason, till you came along
I can’t imagine how I lived before
Or what I’m gonna do, now that you’re gone
Oh God this ain’t the way it’s suppose to be
Heaven can’t need you, more than me
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2006-01-08 13:22:10]
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Re: Heaven Can't
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 01:45:09 PM AEST
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| Gosh....this really pulls at the heart strings!!!!! I love the tenderness here...very good write...if this is your life for real...I'm sorry for your loss...Shari |
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Re: Heaven Can't
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by bernard2 on
Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 01:57:54 PM AEST
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| When things go wrong it seems as if there is no ending to the misery but believe me the sun will shine again just give it time.,bernard2 |
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Re: Heaven Can't
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 02:29:14 PM AEST
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Beautifully written, Dave...
Pulls at the heartstrings, it does...
Hope all is well..
Jenni
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Re: Heaven Can't
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 02:42:05 PM AEST
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| beautiful poem. |
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Re: Heaven Can't
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 03:48:56 PM AEST
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A very sad and emotional write that pulls at the strings of ones heart. You have the amazing ability of being able to express ur inner thoughts and emotions well. Keep penning down ur emotions it helps the wounds heal.
*heartfelt Hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: Heaven Can't
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by dc on
Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 04:03:27 PM AEST
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Thanks to all for your concern, but this didn't happento me.
I went to a friends funeral and witnessed his familys grief . When I woke the next day this was already written as a song in my head.
Thanks to all for your comments and concerns
Dave |
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Re: Heaven Can't
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 04:16:03 PM AEST
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well written i can almost hear the melody
Shari |
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Re: Heaven Can't
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by reecy on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 11:05:44 AM AEST
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| wow i loved it, it was cleary written from your heart, very ispiring. |
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Re: Heaven Can't
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 07:14:20 PM AEST
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| Very effective dialogue and very effective use of imagery, really loved this poem. Title is outstanding.. Raquel Leah |
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