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watching
Contributed by
paul_x_walker
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Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 11:07:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
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watching out the window
watching everyone run and play
watching them each night and day
darknessfalls through the night
i sneaked out the broken gate
heading towards the graves
smashing head stones each step of the way
there it is i found the one special grave
now all that is left is to bring him to life
and make the world suffer to are delight
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2006-01-08 11:07:43]
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Re: watching
(User Rating: 1 )
by JenJen on
Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 11:36:10 AM AEST
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Hey
this poem is amazing!! i tihnk its really really really good, its one of those poems that makes you think about whats gone wrong in his/her life to make them act in this way!! keep up the amazing work
Luv
Jenz
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Re: watching
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 11:59:56 AM AEST
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What a nice approach Jennifer, and I don't agree with you.......this poem is special in that I could feel what it was you were saying, that is rare today, so many people have lost their way and their feelings with it.
Great poem, very different, but just because it's different doesn't make it bad!
Warm love
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Re: watching
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 02:11:40 PM AEST
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great job honey
i thought it was awsome write.
love and hugs mom |
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