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They Think They Know You
Contributed by
poetryfreak13
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Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 10:54:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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They think they know you
With your fake smile on
But the real you is
Behind a mask
Locked Inside
You hide
Hidden
From everyone
Only you know the real you.
Like a puzzle
Hard to figure out
But once you do
It's all worth it.
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poetryfreak13
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2006-01-08 10:54:04]
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Re: They Think They Know You
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by Wachumiri on
Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 11:47:31 AM AEST
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It's weird to write this type of poem about/for somebody else, mostly the writers write it to let out their emotions and frustrations. Well done there, I like that.
Welcome to YPDC.
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Re: They Think They Know You
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by enigma on
Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 02:43:18 PM AEST
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...masks are scary business...when I read it a second time, I imagined my "ego" talking to my "id..." ...most of us are wearing masks from our early childhood development attachment years...the "puzzle" is certainly hard to figure out, but, you're right, it is worth it...
...most of us have no idea the poem is about us...
...appreciated...
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Re: They Think They Know You
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by Mangos on
Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 08:51:09 PM AEST
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very nice, straight and to the point
no go tell him who it was for |
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Re: They Think They Know You
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by Twinkle on
Thursday, 26th January 2006 @ 01:02:51 AM AEST
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yes! this was about the true self...all of us wear masks....atleast once in a life...there are many who wear mask always...as you told....ONLY YOU KNOW THE REAL YOU...
nice write
-twinkle
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