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Moon Song
Contributed by
memyselfandi
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Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 03:21:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I miss him
Because I have missed so many before him
Who never came back
And when I weep for this goodbye
I am weeping for all of the empty spaces
That he has filled
Without him
I am as punctured as the moon.
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memyselfandi
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2006-01-08 03:21:02]
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Re: Moon Song
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 10:50:22 AM AEST
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| WOW. Great write. The punctured moon sounds strange...but I get you there. So much said in so little words. Peace to you, Laura |
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Re: Moon Song
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by MrJeans on
Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 04:43:28 PM AEST
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I like that
last line there
different way
of saying things!
Keep up the writes |
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Re: Moon Song
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by ButchHoward on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 04:27:27 PM AEST
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Nice title and expresses well the sentiments about feelings we have all had, at one time or another, when anticipating the inevitable goodbye.
Semper Fidelis
Butch |
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