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Whispers that can not be Heard
Contributed by
brew
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Saturday, 7th January 2006 @ 10:01:07 PM in AEST
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Simple whispers in the mind
Makes all you want become defined
Pondering thoughts which fill the head
Gives you hope of which seemed dead
You dream of things that would bring smiles
Then the reality hits :was it worth the miles
The simple hopes that were brought in time
Have now surpassed and lost behind
take what one has been given, and never act unrational, nor uncondictional
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Re: Whispers that can not be Heard
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 7th January 2006 @ 11:41:03 PM AEST
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Lovely words, Brew...
I called MH today and we had a lovely chat. I really miss him and his poems....but happy to hear that he was doing well.....
You have a great year!!!
Hugs
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Re: Whispers that can not be Heard
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by bernard2 on
Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 05:07:56 AM AEST
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| Some good words of advice and wisdom in this poem. Great poem brew. bern |
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Re: Whispers that can not be Heard
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 11:17:09 AM AEST
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oh brew, such beauty expressed in simple ways u speak 4 the heart as well as from it, most lovely my friend as always . . .
((((((((Brew)))))))))
Ben |
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Re: Whispers that can not be Heard
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by Spike on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 03:24:59 AM AEST
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Brew, I agree with Bern, you've expressed some deep and shared philosophical life lessons here plainly and honestly.
Spike |
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Re: Whispers that can not be Heard
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 01:26:41 PM AEST
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never act unrational, nor uncondictional!
well that's me ******! great work.
J |
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Re: Whispers that can not be Heard
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 10:20:31 PM AEST
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| you are correct.. listen to your heart, there are true whispers that come there and will never be lost or left behind .. lovely write, thank you for the wisdom Raquel Leah |
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Re: Whispers that can not be Heard
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 09:34:25 AM AEST
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True words. This was well written and the ryhmes were beautiful. Great poem.
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Re: Whispers that can not be Heard
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd January 2006 @ 05:34:06 PM AEST
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Dear Dayna, how wonderful a write! I couldn't agree more
with the sentiment that lies herein. You penned this
very well, my dear. The last two lines have my mind
reeling with emotion.
*hugs*
hope all is well hun!
~Breezy |
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Re: Whispers that can not be Heard
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by Astralbermudian on
Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 12:19:33 PM AEST
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| heya this was really good Brew. I just wanted to stop by and thank you for the reviews, they made me smile, you described me perfectly, I must be looking like an idiot just smiling here. Well you seem to be quite used to writing so keep doing it! |
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Re: Whispers that can not be Heard
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by halli on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 03:04:08 PM AEST
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its great brew really emotional and it rings true.
~halli |
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