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Life in the mainstream
Contributed by
the_story_of_the_year
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Saturday, 7th January 2006 @ 01:14:46 PM in AEST
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Is that how life is supposed to be?
The lives I see on the movie screen
Impossible standards, expectations
Life in the mainstream
We all fell short
But we should all be proud
We broke the mold that holds us
Screamed out loud in one voice
Rejoice, the world is ours
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2006-01-07 13:14:46]
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Re: Life in the mainstream
(User Rating: 1 )
by europeanprincess on
Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 07:48:24 PM AEST
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| this was not one the best that i have read but very interesting. if i were you i would take the first part and keep going with that. i really liked that but the second was sort of, well, blah... i think i know where you were going with the second part but i really think you should take on more with the first part. but thank you for sharing. |
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Re: Life in the mainstream
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by xXx_lil_pyro_xXx on
Tuesday, 6th February 2007 @ 05:24:13 PM AEST
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| i agree with europeanprincess it isn't the best but it ranks up there. i am disappointed and shocked at how far this life has fallin from what it was. the world doesn't belong to actors and world powers, it belongs to everyone. your poem holds alot of truth. great job. |
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