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The Voice
Contributed by
Ari
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Saturday, 7th January 2006 @ 03:59:34 AM in AEST
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Why should I cry?
When the whole world
Should be wondering why
Just like me
Why should I yell?
When a smaller mind
Argues that they're right
Just because of the way they tell
Their point of view
Why should I get sad?
When no one understands
And puts me down, calls me stupid
Just because they think what I am saying is bad
They just don't know
So I will fly over their hills
And I will stay over their minds
I will continue to feel just the way I do
Because thats the happiness that I find
No one can take that away from me
No matter how loud they yell
The only way I listen to them
Is if they listen to me as well
So find yourself an opinion
Find yourself a choice
But unless your willing to learn from others
No one is going to hear your voice
Copyright ©
Ari
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2006-01-07 03:59:34]
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Re: The Voice
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by MacGyver_Dk on
Saturday, 7th January 2006 @ 04:23:36 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed this poem! Your thoughts and outlook are exactly like mine. If people would just understand what you wrote, then the word communication wouldnt just be a word. Look forward to reading more from you.
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Re: The Voice
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by Jazzy on
Saturday, 7th January 2006 @ 08:29:33 AM AEST
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| All I can say is this entire write is full of honesty and truth...you have to listen to be heard...luv and respect~Jazzy~ |
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Re: The Voice
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by Black_Rainbow on
Saturday, 7th January 2006 @ 09:57:24 AM AEST
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thats amazing! not just what you wrote but the way you managed to make it so personal and yet for everyone at the same time, Keep it up
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