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Give Me Your Love
Contributed by
exodus
on
Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 09:00:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Give me your love, I've watched you all these lonely days
You can't take it away me, this craze
Check out the light I shine upon you
Think of all the things I would really love but never do
I won't steal it from you, unless you must take the chance
Come on little honey, save that last dance
I will let the sun shine upon your face
No shadows around you, so pretty in such a sacred place
Show me your image, let me copy it note for note
Grab a hold of your bag, jump like a toad out of a tiny boat
Hold me closer, as the light shines on by
I lied about the shadows, so go on and cry
I got your love and there's nothing you can do
You might as well hand over your soul, and you know its the truth
I've been waiting for this moment, just like a hunter sits for his prey
You stupid little sweetheart, you might as well been mine yesterday
Now sit down darling, and keep that pretty mouth shut
I'm out to get some love tonight, something pure-bred, 'cuz I'm sick of the smut
Stop your silly crying, just let your love roll
Shut your mouth little girl, open your eyes and let me kiss your pretty soul
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exodus
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2006-01-06 21:00:58]
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Re: Give Me Your Love
(User Rating: 1 )
by gizmo2010 on
Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 09:27:23 PM AEST
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| its a little disturbing good but disturbing like what is it really about not to be nosey just wanted to know but it is a good write 4 stars |
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Re: Give Me Your Love
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 7th January 2006 @ 01:13:18 PM AEST
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| creepy but i liked it just the same. good job! |
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