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Lost a Fight
Contributed by
kiela_Rox_mi_Socks
on
Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 08:32:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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1/4/06
Broken to a point,
Where she’ll shatter,
Rolling up a joint,
To her love doesn’t matter.
Blood on her wall,
Cuts dance on her skin,
Screams down the hall,
Twenty shots of gin.
Laying in the dark,
Body very weary,
She feels rapid beats of her heart,
Her soul disappears.
Her eyes close slowly,
Doesn’t feel pain,
Heart stopped fast,
Funeral in pouring rain.
© Care S.
Copyright ©
kiela_Rox_mi_Socks
... [
2006-01-06 20:32:22]
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Re: Lost a Fight
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by gizmo2010 on
Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 09:14:28 PM AEST
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| wow thats all i have to say is wow where did you get the idea i mean that is really deep |
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Re: Lost a Fight
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by UnlovedChild on
Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 09:54:29 PM AEST
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| This poem was great, I like it! |
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