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Getting Over You
Contributed by
becca_au85
on
Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 07:46:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I know the hardest thing
I'll ever have to do
Is to finally say
Good bye to you.
I know in my mind
I have to let you go
Even though my heart
still says I love you so.
I wish I didn't have to
Cause with you my heart belongs,
I really want to believe
We can over come the odds.
But when I face reality
I know you'll never change
And I know I'll be the one
That you always blame.
The biggest problem now
Is trying to move on
Because our baby needs me
And I've got to be strong.
I know my heart is breaking
As these tears fall from my eyes
But what good is a life
Filled with deceipt and lies.
Copyright ©
becca_au85
... [
2006-01-06 19:46:45]
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Re: Getting Over You
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 08:18:01 PM AEST
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heartbreak does hurt...but you will be ok...just remember they weren't worth it, their loss, not yours
great write
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Re: Getting Over You
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by gizmo2010 on
Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 09:20:40 PM AEST
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| that was a really good poem full of feeling and emotion i really liked it you have talent |
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Re: Getting Over You
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 7th January 2006 @ 09:29:38 PM AEST
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You are as exquisit a writter as they come, this is divine, i was captivated by it, your emotions saturated me and yes i'm picking up on the style change and while your form is a bit different you haven't lost any thing in fact i'd say your not only wise beyond your years but have the poetic maturity 2 prove it,
in a word, " MASTERPEICE " u r poetry . . .
((((becca)))))
Ben |
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