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Reaching For Heaven
Contributed by
HeartShapedBox
on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 01:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Filled with deep yearning
Admiration for unbridled intellect
Desire ignited by simplicity
Strength of character feeds temptation
As time flows through my fingers like water
Slowly evaporating through the creases
Inclined to pursue this graceful presence
To be close to sweet salvation
Yet it feels like forever
till we will meet eyes again
And insanity invades my mind
Until I can try to harness and bottle
your sweet scent
which strangely lingers in my thoughts
without explanation.
Time to turn the page
And try to come in contact with bliss.
Copyright ©
HeartShapedBox
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2003-01-26 01:00:00]
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Re: Reaching For Heaven
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by fayeelizibeth on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 03:03:45 PM AEST
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| wow- you have a talent alison- you shoulda shown me these before- i wouldn't have had to plauge the world with my bad poetry if i knew there was someone else so close to me that was so talented- yes- really- i can feel how you feel in this poem- it is amazing- |
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Re: Reaching For Heaven
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by Tails on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 06:26:55 PM AEST
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| very well written, good job....keep it up, hope to hear more of your stuff |
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Re: Reaching For Heaven
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by fancyface4898 on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 03:21:07 PM AEST
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| Very nicely written. YOu did a real good job |
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