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Fight From Hell

Contributed by hisprettygirl on Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 05:14:25 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Whenever i see a girl with tears in her eyes
with no apparent reason...
i cant help but wonder
do her parents hate her too?
Simply a mere image of myself,
the girl that some feel sorry for...
Yet those people who are
no more than the reason she lives
have become in fact her reason
to no longer try to live...
They think by punishing her
setting rules
destroying her...
they have a sense of control
control by force...
If only they knew how wrong they really were
maybe they would notice
the place where they have driven me to...
the cliff or bridge, the perfect place to jump...
maybe someday they'll know
just what it is they made me do.
My wrists and hands
drenched in blood
me face still soaked with tears
this anger that i feel for you
has grown through all these years-
you threaten me with losing my home
or taking the ones i love most away,
yet all you do is gash my wrists
annihilating all my hope today
did you know you killed my soul
and the life i was meant to have...
by tearing at my crying eyes with words
and all the hate you have...
so im done im through
you've done me in,
so now my final imperfected sin...
the fault is no one's but my own
i just cant take it anyore...
i'm not as strong as everyone,
including myself once thought i was
so im giving into my weakness
its tearing me apart
because it shouldn't and didn't
need to be like this
but nightmares come true too...
as i've lost my mind
and the rest of me along with it...
its time for me to say goodbye,
please come down and visit...
so maybe i'll see you
beyond the veil
then we can continue where we left off here...
with our wretched fight from hell..




Copyright © hisprettygirl ... [ 2006-01-06 17:14:25]
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Re: Fight From Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Juggalette_chick666pk on Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 05:24:15 PM AEST
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Very emotional, you got your word across. i can relate well to this. Very good write.

-Vicki


Re: Fight From Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by weepingprophet on Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 05:30:25 PM AEST
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I feel for the concept of this write but use your anger to your advantage. Anger grows strength inside of us for a short period before it begins to destroy. Strategically and wisely grow what you can from your anger and always remember that "control" is an ALLUSION.

~keep your lying eyes over your shoulder to watch your f***ing back, no allusion of control will stifle my attack~weepingprophet


Re: Fight From Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 05:35:49 PM AEST
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good poem! remember nobody can have control over you unless you let them don't give in to weakness! Dominate! Your better than the people that try to bring you down b/c the truth is they are the weak ones. the fact that you've put up with them this long says enough.

anyways i liked the poem and i hope things get better for you *hugs*


Re: Fight From Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 08:15:36 PM AEST
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a great write with alot of anger beware of those feeling as they can kill you inside
great write


Re: Fight From Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by gizmo2010 on Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 11:17:05 PM AEST
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very deep and filled with all the different emotions i liked it




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