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Damage
Contributed by
HeartShapedBox
on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 12:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Fallen stones of morbid truth
Cascading onto my rocky path
Shaky pebbles of underlying grief
Foolish pride swallowing me.
Bruising and damaging the spirit
Of one who cares for me deeply
Challenging the logic of affection
Shunning words of admiration
Embracing thoughts of self-abolition.
The harsh wind chaps my lips
yet the harshness of the wind
is no match for the ruthless nature
that my spirit has evolved into.
And I am trapped in this sullen state
with my faded integrity to blame.
Copyright ©
HeartShapedBox
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2003-01-26 00:40:00]
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Re: Damage
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by fayeelizibeth on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 02:57:53 PM AEST
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| hey alison- this is really really good- i love the phrase "logic of affection" it really makes you think- hmm- really good- and- that's it- talk to you later hunny! |
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Re: Damage
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by fancyface4898 on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 03:24:11 PM AEST
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| another nice write I hope to read mor of your writing |
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