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her death
Contributed by
dead_inside
on
Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 02:46:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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she is too hurt
deep inside
she cant go on
she can not hide
she lifts the gun
and starts to shake
wanting to sleep
and never wake
lots of thoughs
ran through her mind
not 1 good memory
she could find
she looked around
and he wasnt there
she mumbled to herself
why doesnt he care
with 1 big sigh
she put the gun to her head
1 pull of the trigger
and she was dead
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Re: her death
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 02:56:52 PM AEST
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| This is so sad .... nice write ... welcome to your poetry dot com.. |
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Re: her death
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by shelby on
Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 03:03:35 PM AEST
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This is heartbreaking.
A beautifully sad written work of art.
I am hoping this is fictional though and not something that happened in your life or something that your thinking about.
Michelle |
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Re: her death
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by Franko on
Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 03:35:04 PM AEST
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| I've read better but thats rather good. I like it. Get rid of the short hand (no 1) please but otherwise a nice poem. Keep up the good work. |
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Re: her death
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 07:34:27 PM AEST
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| This is one of trhe saddest and most powerful poem that i have read so far. This was excellent and I hope you keep writing! |
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