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Love TriangleCutter
Contributed by
Cynic
on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 11:17:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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In the night,
I watch her,
hold him close and hide her wrists,
she cries tonight,
and loves him,
and his eclectic kiss.
In the night,
I watch him,
as he laughs and finds a vein,
he'll love you,
from a distance,
and he'll take away your pain.
In the night,
if only you,
could see why I'm afraid,
I'd help us,
find a reason,
to throw away your blade.
Copyright ©
Cynic
... [
2006-01-05 23:17:55]
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Re: Love TriangleCutter
(User Rating: 1 )
by idiotbox on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 11:57:05 PM AEST
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| all i can say is that i really identify with this poem.. good write just keep it going |
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Re: Love TriangleCutter
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by crow6279 on
Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 12:47:19 AM AEST
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| I like this one...good write |
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Re: Love TriangleCutter
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 07:44:46 AM AEST
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an amazing write, i love your rhyming pattern.
well done! |
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Re: Love TriangleCutter
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by princess_of_pain on
Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 10:00:53 PM AEST
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| i love it |
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