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true love
Contributed by
Ed_leiva_15
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Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 10:29:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
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the dark winter sky falls over our once beautiful realtionship, now tarnished by infedelity and lies... what once was a beauty, a marvel, an amazement, an undestructible LOVE now lies buried in the dust beneath us... whatever happened to "ill love you forever"? whatever happened to "our love will never die"? we lived off the feeling of never believeing we would break up, what happened to the days where one day without each other was a living hell? i guess your last words to me were true....it was all a lie...or was it? i dont believe it was... i dont believe 2 misunderstood souls could spend 2 years together and call it all a lie. what we had could be called love... i dont call it love, what we had was more than love, i would give my heart to you on a silver platter if you asked for it...... no body knew who you really were untill i came along, nobody knew who i really was untill you came along... you were my girlfriend, my future wife, my lover, my best friend... no matter what changes our relationship goes through just know this i love you with all my heart and always will till and after death
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Re: true love
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by crow6279 on
Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 12:39:48 AM AEST
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| while it seems to be more of an outpouring than poetry or prose...i know exactly where you are coming from. things will get better with time...or so they tell me |
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Re: true love
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by Juggalette_chick666pk on
Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 05:41:14 PM AEST
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I'd have to agree with him good write though, although i am girl i understand how you must feel. im still waiting for me to get better! ever need to talk message me.
-Vicki |
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Re: true love
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 11:36:06 PM AEST
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awwwwwww I am sorry hope things get
better for you and your g/f ..
Welcome to your poetry dot com. |
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