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Come Back
Contributed by
nameless_poet
on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 06:20:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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my lady walked out
on me last night
so I hit the town
and found a neon light
I found a place
to drown my sorrow
somewhere I could settle down
and prepare myself for tommorow
I can't go on
without here here
so i'll say "i'm sorry"
and shed a tear
she may not listen
now just like then
she'll just sit there wondering
exactly where i've been
but one day soon
she'll be coming home
our love will bloom again
and she will never roam
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2006-01-05 18:20:37]
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Re: Come Back
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 06:30:47 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC....
Nice rhymes...with a pleasing flow even tho it is so sad.
Good luck with your lady...
Jenni |
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Re: Come Back
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by iodinelove on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 07:54:59 PM AEST
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You know, it took me three times to actually get to this poem...kept getting a...hell i don't even remember now...the little error page. Anyway, good work...I usually don't have time for this, so don't expect too many comments from me...but..eh, i'll read em when I can, ok? ^_^
again, very nice. WRITE EVERYTHING!!
always, abraham |
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Re: Come Back
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by SocAstn on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 06:55:12 PM AEST
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I really like the flow, it definately was an easy read. And I dig that. I enjoyed the message and best of luck with your lady.
Austin |
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