|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Lying Cold
Contributed by
SkC_Cutie
on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 01:53:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
|
Can you hear my plea?
Hear me calling out to you
Can you see my pain?
See the blood rushing through
I am waiting
I am waiting for darkness
Can you read me?
See how I feel
Watch me wither
Patient of time
I am leaving
Leaving the world behind
No time to despair
I am trembling
Of all that is out there
Out there waiting for me
Lying restless
Waiting for my time
They are coming
They are coming for me
Come rescue me
I am trapped in a nightmare
I’m all alone
There is no one out there
Hear my cry
I am breathless lying on the floor
It’s growing cold
I see no light
I can hear but I have now lost my sight
Is anyone there?
There to help me out
No time to despair
I am trembling
Of all that is out there
Out there waiting for me
Lying restless
Waiting for my time
I am leaving
Leaving the world behind
Copyright ©
SkC_Cutie
... [
2006-01-05 13:53:44]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Lying Cold
(User Rating: 1 )
by LifeFadingAway on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 05:00:31 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
'I am leaving
Leaving the world behind'
I really like those lines |
|
|
Re: Lying Cold
(User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 30th January 2006 @ 02:52:25 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This is a chilling write Shaunie. The emotional agony leaps from the page. You are never alone though, not as long as I'm around :o)
Very well written
Roses
Me |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
