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Beautiful
Contributed by
frankcube
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Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 08:48:09 AM in AEST
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You’re Beautiful
There’s no denying
For when compared to a glorious sunset
Or the shimmer of a blue moon
Nay the blooming of a rose
Your presence, your name
It goes beyond all measure into beauty
And as beautiful as you are
You’re mine to keep
To hold, forever
Such a feeling to bear beauty itself within my own arms,
Its pure bliss
For a beauty as rare as yours
Is like an endless kiss
Copyright ©
frankcube
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2006-01-05 08:48:09]
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Re: Beautiful
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by NoSaint on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 09:54:25 AM AEST
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beautiful
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Re: Beautiful
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by Jackee_line on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 10:02:15 AM AEST
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| well done |
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Re: Beautiful
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by brew on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 10:29:50 AM AEST
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WOW........someone is really lucky, to have a passion write dedticated for them.! Simple, and yes it was beautiful
Brew~ |
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Re: Beautiful
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 11:52:24 AM AEST
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This is, as the title says..."Beautiful!!"
Well done!
Jenni |
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Re: Beautiful
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 12:40:30 PM AEST
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I had to read and comment, since so many of your comments to others ask for them to look at yours! :-)
And so I read and enjoyed. Written with heartfelt emotion. Had a nice flow and would make anyone feel beautiful that gets the chance to read it. Great job!
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: Beautiful
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 02:57:13 PM AEST
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| your poems are full of joy, wisdom... a secret speaking truth about its memory, where the unemployed mind has laughed and never had to find itself unhappy. If you are not a published poet, I would be very surprised.. reading your works is like discovering the finest jewel never known to man... RL |
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Re: Beautiful
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 04:48:06 PM AEST
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How romantically beautiful. This is the first time I read ur work and I gotta say I liked what I read. Well done and thanks so much for sharing ur wonderful work with us.
*hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: Beautiful
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 09:00:09 PM AEST
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Your words are refined, well-structured and full of grace. I shall look for your work often.
*Smiles
Rita |
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Re: Beautiful
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by Sinned on
Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 01:06:52 PM AEST
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Such a feeling to bear beauty itself within my own arms.
To hold Beauty --- what a beautiful way to express love. Beautiful
Sinned |
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Re: Beautiful
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by Caged Soul on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 02:00:24 AM AEST
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There's not many poems out there that can make me smile, I mean, really smile and be happy. This one made me smile.
There is just something about your style of writing that is just totally suave. I love that you write with such unpredictability that just makes your work that much more real
Thanks for sharing this with us.
Ash |
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Re: Beautiful
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by Packatack on
Saturday, 29th April 2006 @ 05:43:36 AM AEST
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Hey another great write here....
shorth and simple...quyanaqpak(thanks) |
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