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flood
Contributed by
Jimmato
on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 02:38:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Breath in fantasy
You look like you do
All this wonder
Painted specially for you
Run out lace
For the trees all to wear
Pinning golden strands
of light in your hair
Leave me out of this
I don't want any more
The rain kept pouring down
Upon my soul
Lead me out of here
I can't take any more
You keep flooding down
To beat down my door.
Taste the morning dew
Take the sun's warmth as well
A bruised apple
Kissed the earth where it fell
Trilling birds
Greet the day with a song
Fail to keep the beat
When something goes wrong
Copyright ©
Jimmato
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2006-01-05 02:38:19] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: flood
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 02:53:09 AM AEST (User
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Greating and I hope u feel better now.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: flood
(User Rating: 1 ) by evilfairy on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 02:09:42 AM AEST (User
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As beautiful as this is..i still can't see that this is a happy piece...all i see is someone holed up and wanting to get out... |
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Re: flood
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 29th August 2007 @ 05:54:31 PM AEST (User
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absolutely beautiful, i love the words you chose and your whole style here,
hugs n' love nessa
roses |
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