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whisky, weed, and women
Contributed by
jessejames
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Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 10:56:44 PM in AEST
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WHISKY,
brightens up a sorrowfull night
blurring the line between wrong and right
leaving me thursty nevermore
leaving me lying on the bathroom floor
WEED,
it takes me to a far off land
leading me by the hand
always calming a tense situation
the perfect solution for a hostile nation
WOMEN,
oh how i love them so
but they always seem to let me go
giving me the want and the need
to drink the whisky and smoke the weed
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Re: whisky, weed, and women
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 11:15:37 PM AEST
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Quite a vicious cycle...isn't it?
nice write..
Jenni |
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Re: whisky, weed, and women
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by trini on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 11:30:53 PM AEST
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heh. Everything leads back to the beginning.
Great write, i like reading it.
keep up the good work.
-trini |
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Re: whisky, weed, and women
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by OzChick on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 12:27:10 AM AEST
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Oh, the irony.....I quite enjoyed this witty poem.
Great form, well done.
~Jenny~ |
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Re: whisky, weed, and women
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by emystar on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 12:58:07 AM AEST
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WEED,
it takes me to a far off land
leading me by the hand
always calming a tense situation
the perfect solution for a hostile nation
Awesome writing.
U r probably right about the Nation.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: whisky, weed, and women
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by Jimmato on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 02:48:04 AM AEST
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| lol, much better than the chicken and the egg story. Almost friday so whisky it is... in tribute of course |
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Re: whisky, weed, and women
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 29th August 2007 @ 06:10:30 PM AEST
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ha! excellent truthful and clever write:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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