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Heartbroken
Contributed by
annslife777
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Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 10:17:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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It kills, Im Killed
It searches, it prays
It captures, it's good
It suffucates, it leaves
Now I cant breathe
Come back and take this away
Find it fast, I cant take another day
This is my poem on love.
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annslife777
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2006-01-04 22:17:09]
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Re: Heartbroken
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by apcfan on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 10:32:01 PM AEST
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For your first poem this is really good. i can feel that you are hurting deep within. I hope that this feeling doesn't last long. It seems like you are trapped. Good luck! Good write...keep it up!
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Re: Heartbroken
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 10:44:33 PM AEST
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| although the words are small its powerfully written. very promising keep it up! |
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Re: Heartbroken
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by trini on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 11:33:35 PM AEST
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Sometimes it's the small things that mean the most.
Very strong, very heartfelt.
I liked reading it, hope to see more from you.
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Re: Heartbroken
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by frankcube on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 11:38:47 PM AEST
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Short, but yes, extremely powerful in its execution. Well done, sincerely.
Please check out my latest poem 'Don't Worry' by Frankcube. |
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