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sick act
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 08:55:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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flesh and rot a fragrant smell a bouquet for the senses
walking dead we hold our head divided by picket fences
a riot act in chains we crack follow with out a lead
forgetting what we already know we forget of others needs
peeling walls a burnt up dream a value lost in flames
a needy son with lighter fun acting with out blame
anger and a loss of value for all thats right
do not care what family thinks we cause the things that strife
a needy girl out for a twirl fifteen going on thirty
in a place she shouldnt be in she starts to get a little flirty
an older man who has a plan he tells her he is only twenty
she ends up in a hollow grave full of promises that left plenty
it sick how we act in the fact that we live on borrowed time
death and crime or a little white line a tarnish on the mind
we all react on the fact that we give more then we recieve
but in our heart we know the start how to truly believe
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Re: sick act
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by trini on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 09:15:57 PM AEST
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WOW. thats all i can say. wow.
words esacpe me. This was brilliantly written. I'm very glad you shared it with YPDC, it's very much appreciated.
Keep up the amazing work!
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Re: sick act
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 10:27:15 PM AEST
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Long time no see my friend.
Wow, this one really brings out the senses.
In a way you could say it made my skin crawl.
I enjoyed reading this.
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Re: sick act
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by frankcube on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 11:42:08 PM AEST
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This poem is amazing. Truly, the level of depth that arises from your brilliant words are intertwined in an array of magical interpretation. I loved it.
Please check out my latest poem 'Don't Worry' by Frankcube. |
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