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Wait for a clear night
Contributed by
the_story_of_the_year
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Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 06:27:27 PM in AEST
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LoveRemembered
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You left us
You left me
Erased me from your life
Just something I'll learn to see and deal with
Does the moon still shine the same
As when it did when we cared?
Does the sun set the same way
When me and you, the sky we shared?
For me, the stars still shine the way they always have
Reminds me that something never change
You just have to wait for a clear night to see it
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Re: Wait for a clear night
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by dc on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 06:57:59 PM AEST
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Sometimes it takes a while till you get one
nice write |
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Re: Wait for a clear night
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by trini on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 08:16:08 PM AEST
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Clear nights are hard to find in the city. Hope you've seen yours. I liked the poem. Keep up the good work
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