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Brighter Days Ahead...
Contributed by
eternal_dreamer
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Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 05:46:28 PM in AEST
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Brighter Days Ahead
As the sun kisses the moon
Darkness shadows the night
The wind it gently plays
An octet under the light
The resin of burnt ashes
Smouldered, sleep at last
As sorrow now ponders
Pain is forever cast
Tears that’s shed bring solace
If only for just awhile
Like the comfort of a mother
Nursing her newborn child
When the sea of despair washes
Covers you with its spray
Happiness will be your towel
To dry your blues away
So when you think that all is lost
To you your dreams have fled
Keep the faith inside your heart
For there's brighter days ahead
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Re: Brighter Days Ahead...
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by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 05:53:00 PM AEST
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Beautifully written and a fine tribute! Great imagery,
clever rhyme.. all make this piece my favourite of the
day.
Tears that’s shed bring solace
If only for just awhile
Like the comfort of a mother
Nursing her newborn child
Very thoughtful and heartfelt
can't wait to read more
Dwayne |
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Re: Brighter Days Ahead...
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by dc on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 05:53:14 PM AEST
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| Nicely done - I have just had the pleasureof meeting Raquel Leah |
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Re: Brighter Days Ahead...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 05:56:26 PM AEST
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| Roo and Eddy, how much I do love you two, and all .. if you only knew.. my heart.. my soul it will pray on to you and all.. no one can stop me, it is in me, He is in me.. you both are such a joy, my peace... what a beautiful write.. yes, brighter days .. they are here.. xxxooo RL |
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Re: Brighter Days Ahead...
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 06:22:53 PM AEST
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Touching and tender words for a most deserving soul. I concur!
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Re: Brighter Days Ahead...
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 06:30:29 PM AEST
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This poem just almost touches the beauty of you. We all love you so much, Sissy. The grace of God will see you through this. He is always with you and so are we.
Much love,
Rita |
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Re: Brighter Days Ahead...
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 06:49:34 PM AEST
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Heartfelt write...... so very sweet of you, Sue..
Hope RL is ok....
Jenni |
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Re: Brighter Days Ahead...
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 07:14:28 PM AEST
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What a lovely tribute to dear and loving friends, and which gives us some enlightment as to how you yourself are, because it takes one to know one my dear.
And I'm so glad that have realized too, that there are brighter days ahead too!
Your days will be up and down, like during any mourning time, but if you continue to look for the brighter ones, more will appear.
I send you warm hugs and much love, and know you will be all right!
Compassionate hugs dear Sue
Warm love
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Re: Brighter Days Ahead...
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 03:42:35 AM AEST
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what a thoughtful person you are.
great write
hugs |
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Re: Brighter Days Ahead...
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 04:04:47 PM AEST
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A most beautiful poemt and tribute and of course written by one who self is an angel of mercy and oustanding poet . . .
(((((Sue)))))
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Re: Brighter Days Ahead...
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 09:18:35 PM AEST
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This is a beautiful and awesome tribute.
Take care.
Scott |
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Re: Brighter Days Ahead...
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by emystar on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 06:46:27 AM AEST
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Such a beautifull, luving tribute to our friend.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Brighter Days Ahead...
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by Spike on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 04:07:29 AM AEST
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Sweet, sweet write, and the best kind of advice.
Spike |
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Re: Brighter Days Ahead...
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 01:07:13 PM AEST
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Great rhyming pattern shove in a decent chorus this would make a great song.
Very well written indeed.
J |
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Re: Brighter Days Ahead...
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 06:28:06 PM AEST
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| A lovely tribute and such a positive message. |
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Re: Brighter Days Ahead...
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by jmpy84 on
Sunday, 22nd January 2006 @ 03:41:56 AM AEST
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| truely u r a wonderful writer |
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Re: Brighter Days Ahead...
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd February 2006 @ 10:08:03 AM AEST
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| Wonderful write. Even when you are down there are brighter days ahead....Mike |
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Re: Brighter Days Ahead...
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by Dom on
Saturday, 28th July 2007 @ 10:29:30 PM AEST
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Most beautiful and eloquent advice coming from a friend.
As alwyas you have written with grace and an artistic flair that paints the most glorious images in my mind.
This was a complete pleasure to read,
Many hugs,
Dom |
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