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What is My Life Coming To?

Contributed by darkgoddess on Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 03:25:18 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

What is my life coming to
What will it be?
Will we have a future
Or will we just have to see?

Why do you pull yourself
So far away?
Why do i feel
That I only get in your way?

Is it that hard
To spend some ime with me?
Or is it all in my mind
Am I going crazy?

I feel that my world
Is falling apart
And you seem to be making it
Worse for me.

My whole world has turned to *****
Since we found out that day
And now it seems that you just don't care
About how I feel this way.

You're never there
You don't seem to care
And it feels as if
You're pulling away from me.

Please help me to understand
Why I feel this way
And just maybe
I will be able to see.

Am I going through too many changes
That I just can't see
That its me pushing you away
Or is it you pulling away from me?

Copyright © darkgoddess ... [ 2006-01-04 15:25:18]
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Re: What is My Life Coming To? (User Rating: 1 )
by trini on Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 08:42:54 PM AEST
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heh. I liked it alot. Confusion is a hard topic to write about, you touched very nicely on it.
Keep up the good work. and all the best with the baby :)
-trini

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