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poem 4
Contributed by
Lady_Ravyn_Bloodstone
on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 11:51:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The darkness,
It surrounds me,
Coating me,
In a dark,
Thick blanket of blackness.
The pain never,
Ever goes away.
I am falling,
And there's no one there,
To help me out of this black hole.
I know where I am standing,
IN HELL AGAIN!!!
Here we go,
Again.
Over & over.
I see a lost puppy.
Who wanders around,
Aimlessly.
I feel so invisible,
To everyone.
I am NOBODY!!!
I know that,
Just like everyone else.
This pain,
It will never go away.
I once thought,
"I matter."
But now I begin to reconsider this thought.
I feel so alone,
In this cruel,
Cruel world,
That we live in.
Copyright ©
Lady_Ravyn_Bloodstone
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2006-01-04 11:51:43]
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Re: poem 4
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 02:45:03 PM AEST
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| wow i love the emotion and the words used to describe your emotions really make the poem stand out. I can feel and see everything you describe. |
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Re: poem 4
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by walks_in_clouds on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 09:32:30 PM AEST
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| I have totally felt like this, in fact lately it seems to be coming back. But since there are people reading your writing, maybe your transparency diminishes. |
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