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Undecided.
Contributed by
butterflygirl40
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Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 01:42:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I acted like I was blessed but I added that I have aged.
I got busted When I have cheated And clouded and counted.
I have doubts that I should ended a long time ago.
I fainted when I drifted off the edge of life.
I have taken so many things for granted in my life.
I am hated by so many people because I have cheated in life.
I am always knotted upinsided and it started again the fights.
I feel so stupid insided because of the fights.
I know you can't trust me ,but I wanted you to .
I Have cheated my own self out of life.
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2006-01-04 01:42:54]
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Re: Undecided.
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by trini on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 08:34:14 PM AEST
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Not bad. In time your poems will flow a bit easier. For now i suggest looking for some new words. Life was used a bit too often
Just a suggestion. Keep posting :)
-trini
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Re: Undecided.
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 08:43:14 PM AEST
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| This is good. Keep up the good work! |
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