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cycle of life
Contributed by
outlaw_mutiny
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Tuesday, 3rd January 2006 @ 11:44:34 PM in AEST
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hello world
goodbye world
a child is born
an old man dies
step foreward
then step back
your in the same place
dont you realize
breath in
breath out
trade old air
for new
put food in
push it out
savor the tast
it's what we do
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2006-01-03 23:44:34]
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Re: cycle of life
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 01:44:42 AM AEST
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| nice poem |
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Re: cycle of life
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 06:21:35 AM AEST
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A vicious cycle indeed... Nicely done..
Jenni |
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Re: cycle of life
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 02:00:11 PM AEST
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I loved this. Life circles through and through.
Hope to chat soon
( having troubles at work so I will be a hit and miss for a few days)
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: cycle of life
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 01:17:25 AM AEST
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| wow, this is great.. a cycle for sure.. keep writing.. wonderful here.. Raquel Leah |
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