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Can You See The Light?
Contributed by
walks_in_clouds
on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2006 @ 11:30:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The moment of certainty
expanding in your eyes,
You look towards me
with fear you can't disguise.
Your pupils dilate
'til theres no color left
except black & white.
Can you see the light?
The time of doubt
has longsince passed,
and you finally step into
this mold you cast.
your mind comprehends
your dire plight.
Can you see the light?
Your mind now grasps
what your hands can't hold,
with no wings you take flight
in a movement so bold.
your arms reach out
though theres no resistance
left to fight.
You finally see the light.
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Re: Can You See The Light?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 03:20:02 PM AEST
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| cool poem it was a very enjoyable read. very interesting. i love your choice of words. |
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Re: Can You See The Light?
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 7th January 2006 @ 08:48:29 PM AEST
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| brilliant poem.. makes me glad I have prepared myself, I can see the Light.. the fear I will have will be love, as it is now, overpowering, bet my eyes will dilate for sure.. a lot of ways a reader can interpret this poem, it is a very, very.. wonderful one.. a lot of depth.. deep meanings RL |
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