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precious memories
Contributed by
outlaw_mutiny
on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2006 @ 10:24:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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precious memories return and unfold
precious memories never grow old
when in the darkness they provide a guiding light
reminding me that things will be alright
they give me hope for a needed new start
these precious memories remain close to my heart
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outlaw_mutiny
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2006-01-03 22:24:50] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: precious memories
(User Rating: 1 ) by Unbreakable on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2006 @ 10:37:57 PM AEST (User
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Short, sweet and to the point, these writes are often the best. Your rhyme scheme flows perfectly and your imagery fits the message so well. This poem is simple and well-written, great work...keep it up!
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