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Slow Suicide
Contributed by
SmileSkinDeep
on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2006 @ 08:01:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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the first time I cut,
I showed you
it was only fifth grade,
you said you did too
you asked:
will I die with a gun?
no:
a razor
I will feel the blood;
feel myself fade away
lost in an intoxicating red haze
imperfect and fake
engraved in my arms,
as for the names on my body:
of the people I've harmed
I said sorry...meant it too
written in blood on the floor
I dont have any to spare,
or write any more
you saw me there
I saw you smile,
you saw me cry
like I hadn't done in a while
the words written on your face,
that feeling only you can replace,
is just a distant memory
as I lay dieing
your silent suicide too
I'm glad my last thought
was of being with you
Copyright ©
SmileSkinDeep
... [
2006-01-03 20:01:43]
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Re: Slow Suicide
(User Rating: 1 )
by DesolantDreamer on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2006 @ 08:05:24 PM AEST
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That actually brought tears to my eyes. How tragic and sad. It explains my feelings every time I cut. I understant and can relate with this poem. Good job.
-May dreams give you wings
Tsubaki |
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Re: Slow Suicide
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by LifeFadingAway on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 07:16:44 PM AEST
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| I like it, I just like it, nothing more to say... |
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Re: Slow Suicide
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 03:04:14 PM AEST
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I really liked this poem...as well, i can relate. I loved the second stanza. gr8 work!
~Jessie |
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Re: Slow Suicide
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by Tiffyo4 on
Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 03:54:17 PM AEST
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| somone who feels like i do is good but it hurts the heart to nice poem |
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