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Drowning in Sadness
Contributed by
rocken88
on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2006 @ 07:43:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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All is bright and all is well,
while the sun is still shining.
Birds are chirping,
butterflies about,
the smell of flowers dancing through the air.
Then a dark cloud comes from nowhere,
right before the crashing storm.
Rain pours and melts,
lightning strikes and tares,
and the thunder shatters my heart.
The flood seeps in around me,
creeping higher and higher,
to my heart,
around my neck,
and then to my eyes.
I have drowned in sadness.
Copyright ©
rocken88
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2006-01-03 19:43:15]
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Re: Drowning in Sadness
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by SmileSkinDeep on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2006 @ 08:06:08 PM AEST
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| ...it reminds me how fast things can change, and how convincing it all can be. good expression, sort of short though. you can always add on to it later. keep writing |
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Re: Drowning in Sadness
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by Shmokin on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 08:58:22 AM AEST
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| nice write, good flow, enjoyable read, thanx for posting :-) |
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Re: Drowning in Sadness
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 10:08:36 AM AEST
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sad..very well write though
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Re: Drowning in Sadness
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 06:58:23 PM AEST
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A sad, emotional piece of poetry penned so well. You draw in ur reader to feel the pain that u feel. May you see brighter days ahead.
*heartfelt hugs for u*
~sue~ |
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