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Striped Socks
Contributed by
Poser
on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2006 @ 07:01:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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No matter how hard
you try,
You will always be
the pretty girl
with nice hair.
A virgin of such,
maybe not all,
but in my mind
you will always
be the rosey cheek,
curly haired girl
with long striped
socks.
No use for the word
romantic,
for you are too young,
too innocent.
And certainly not
hopeless, for you
can push forward
with confidence
when the need
arises.
Copyright ©
Poser
... [
2006-01-03 19:01:25]
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Re: Striped Socks
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 02:51:03 PM AEST
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| A sweet write you have here. Good use of words. Good flow |
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Re: Striped Socks
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 06:38:08 PM AEST
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There's a wealth of inspiration to be found in other people, when you can tap into it, as you've done here. I like this piece; simple and graceful. Well done!
Andrew |
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