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Another Day
Contributed by
dc
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Tuesday, 3rd January 2006 @ 10:03:10 AM in AEST
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What A Day - Pour myself a strong one
What A day - Thought it never end
The tingle of bourbon as it slides past my tongue
Seeps into my chest and burns through the numb
But it can’t burn fast enough
Gonna be another long one
Gonna be another long one
The only light – It comes from the outside
It feels too bright- but I’m not messing with the shade
As I sink in the sofa surrounded by pillows
I pull in my legs till they’re smashing my breasts
And I can’t get close enough
Gonna be another long one
By now things should be better – but they just stay the same
Even worse would be better- cause nothing and no one and no where
Is no way to end –Another day
The morning sun – saturates the sofa
I need more sleep – there isn’t anywhere to hide
As I crawl to the kitchen and put on some coffee
I tell myself that it’s gonna be ok
But I don’t sound sure enough
It’s gonna be another long one
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2006-01-03 10:03:10]
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Re: Another Day
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by Winterland on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2006 @ 11:01:20 AM AEST
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Great poem! You really took me there. Good job.
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Re: Another Day
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by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2006 @ 12:09:33 PM AEST
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Re: Another Day
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2006 @ 01:16:16 PM AEST
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Please let me welcome you dc to the most wonderful Poetry site in all the world!!!
I'm so glad you're aboard with us, you have so much to contribute, you are very talented indeed!
I especially like this poem, because it is so real, by that I mean, it's true through and through. True poets tell their real feelings at all times, either to inspire or make people think.
Yours certainly took me places I've already been, forlorn, and drugery, until I realized I could feel great if I went out and helped another soul!
Try it it will pick you up and never let you down.
Welcome again,
Warm love
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