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If Walls Could Talk
Contributed by
sophie_taylor
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Tuesday, 3rd January 2006 @ 03:11:44 AM in AEST
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If Walls Could Talk
If Walls Could Talk
What Would They Say
would they comment
on what you do from day to day
they would see everything that happens
every fight and every tear
they could see whether your really happy
or sitting there alone in fear
its not like i want them to talk
incase they say something bad
they could stir you up
and make you really mad
but its curious to see what they would say
to see your every second and walk
i really want to know what they would say
if only walls could talk
by sophie taylor
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Re: If Walls Could Talk
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2006 @ 10:43:23 AM AEST
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but since they can't talk i'll speak 4 them, this poem is awsome and refreshing 2 say the least, not 2 mention very creative, nice writting and the use of one's imagination . . .
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Re: If Walls Could Talk
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 04:43:25 PM AEST
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| LOL.. oh yes, if they could talk, my walls would be caving in about right now lol. and the fly on it would be cursing as well lol lol. Lovely write.. I light a scented candle to keep the walls from caving in over here lol.. makes it a little bit larger in the rooms, so they can't hear me... I do know what my walls say, lol. and so does God.. lol. RL |
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